Sunday, January 23, 2011

Free verse poem

Dream about you

I dream about you 24/7
We dance in the dream all night
Your voice and your scent
So realistic
So toxic

When I wake up
The pain and emptiness in my heart
And one pure tear drop
Filling my heart with pain
The pain that will stay forever in my heart

1 comment:

  1. A. It needs 2 more lines, but it follows the form well.
    B. It continues to follow the theme of the speaker's relationship with the girl he loves.

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