Sunday, February 13, 2011

Ode

Ode to lemonade

Ode to lemonade the greatest drink
Full of sweet and sour taste
Fresh and tangy scent with color of yellow and pink
Cool like ice of freezing North Pole
Fresh like pure water in Alps Mountain

You can feel the fresh lemon from the ground
And you can feel the clean water from the Lake
Smooth and soft swallow make me love this drink
Cheap and tasty drink with cool, fresh feeling

It cools you down in hot summer day
It gives a joy to your awful life
One sip will brighten your miserable life
So let’s drink lemonade and refresh our day!

1 comment:

  1. A. It follows the right amount of stanzas and rhyme scheme and an iambic pentameter.
    B. It again changes to a theme different from the original.

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